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Jii's Corner XD

Posted: May/13/2008, 4:48pm
Feeling: happy(ish) normal

Hey it's Jii (Yumi's twin brother) An online friend of mine and Yumi's wanted me to post a couple pages of the story me and Yumi are working on so here they are

Neither me nor Yumi have thought of what to name it so after you read the first couple pages could you give some suggestions(note: story summary in story guide line for sky dragon journal entry)

(note 2: Yumi wanted the Journal title to be what it is)

Chapter one: The Journey's Start

"I think I'm lost," Sora thought as her outstretched hand touched something hard and rough. It startled her for a moment but then she realized that it was just a tree. "Maybe I should call for help," she thought again. "Not that anyone will hear me," she muttered to herself. She felt for another tree around her. "Great. One minute I'm outside the city and the next I'm wandering, lost, through the forest.” She tripped over some of the tree roots as she accidentally went deeper into the forest. As she felt around for another tree a hand grabbed her arm. “WHO THE HECK?!” she yelled. “What are you doing in my forest?” the angry voice questioned. The sound of the boy’s voice seemed around 14 or 15 but Sora couldn’t tell which it was. “Trying to get out,” Sora answered in a rude and annoyed tone. “Hey!” the boy shouted angrily. “What?!” Sora asked back annoyed and confused. “Look me in the eyes when you talk to me!!” the boy scolded. “That I can’t do!” Sora responded. “WHY NOT?!” the boy yelled tilting Sora’s head up until his angry eyes met her blank, angry stare. “Am I look in your eyes now?” Sora questioned annoyed by the boy’s actions. “OH,” the boy said shocked, “you’re blind.” “Yup, now that that’s out of the way. WHAT THE HECK DO YOU WANT WITH ME?!” Sora screamed. “I’m sorry,” the boy said apologetically, “This is a misunderstanding. My name is Ahito.” “Mine’s Sora,” she said as Ahito released her arm. “If it’s not too much to ask, may I see who you are?” Sora asked politely. “How?” Ahito asked confused. “I just feel your facial features and hair. Stuff like that,” Sora said casually as she shrugged. “Sure,” Ahito said, “If you can keep a secret.” “I can,” she answer as Ahito gently put her outstretched has on his face. Sora gently stoked each of Ahito’s features, memorizing every one as she went along. She was shock to find when she started to feel his hair she found too large fox ears. “Oh my God!” she said surprised taking her hand away, “You’re a kitsune!! That’s why you were so weird before.” Ahito nodded. “Umm, Ahito, are you there?” Sora asked. “Oh! Yeah, sorry I forgot you were blind,” Ahito said embarrassed, “I nodded earlier.” Sora giggled, “That’s fine.” Ahito glanced at the sky then said to Sora, “It’s getting late why don’t you spend the night at my place?” “Sure,” Sora answered as she smiled then yawned. “How late is it?” she asked stopping her yawn. “About midnight,” Ahito answered. “Follow me,” Ahito said as he started to walk away. After about five steps Sora called out, “Um, Ahito? I can’t see. Remember?” “Oh, right. Sorry,” he said walking back to get Sora. “It’s okay. Happens all the time,” Sora answer with a soft grin. When Ahito got back to Sora he started to just lead her to his home, but after a few steps he realized it was going to take to long and picked her up and carried her on his back. About two steps later Sora asked, “Ahito, what are you doing?” “Carrying you to my place because it will take three hours more if I just lead you there by the arm,” Ahito answered. “Oh… okay,” Sora managed to say before she fell asleep on Ahito’s back.

Thanks for reading. Sorry it's so long. Hope you like it. Yumi will probably draw it out later so until then, See you later.

-Jii